I am glad you liked the level of visual detail! tbh I felt the detail, along with some of the dialogue, was a bit washed-out in this one, due to the need to cram in so much plot; although I'm mostly happy with the balance in the other chapters.
thanks for reading! :D I'm having ridiculous amounts of fun writing this one, so I'm glad when other people do enjoy it as well.
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Date: 2009-12-13 09:18 am (UTC)thanks for reading! :D I'm having ridiculous amounts of fun writing this one, so I'm glad when other people do enjoy it as well.