Oh, I like this. I think Dino's voice is very well-done -- the narrative here shows how observant he is and how good he is at analysing people (like we discussed on AIM the other day; that aspect of Dino comes through clearly in this fic). My favourite paragraph is the one before last -- I agree with it completely, particularly the first part. I can't really see Hibari dying of old age, honestly. His teeth would fall out and then he wouldn't be able to bite anyone to death, and what will he do with his time then? XDDD
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Date: 2008-11-11 09:29 pm (UTC)Anyway, lovely ficlet ♥