I just finnished all you have posted about SoN and I'm REALLY in love with the story. Really in love.
The small details are perfect, each one of them. And the mystery about almost every turn of the plot is thrilling. Specially, (and that's why I decided to review here) Yukimura and Fuji. They're my favorites characters and I like very much how you deal with them because they're Yukimura and Fuji and I can see them doing all this things. And Atobe. Atobe. Your way to write him is absolutely awesome. It makes you love him.
And I have to ask why is Kirihara so worried about Fuji in here. I can't help but think that Fuji will end dead. Kirihara's words sound kind of prophetic. Also, if it is the first VR encounter between Fuji and Yukimura means that in the present time of SoN have been others??? I don't except answers LOL I guess you'll tell more about them in the fic and I'll know all that. Only, I have to ask
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Date: 2008-09-09 03:49 pm (UTC)The small details are perfect, each one of them. And the mystery about almost every turn of the plot is thrilling. Specially, (and that's why I decided to review here) Yukimura and Fuji. They're my favorites characters and I like very much how you deal with them because they're Yukimura and Fuji and I can see them doing all this things. And Atobe. Atobe. Your way to write him is absolutely awesome. It makes you love him.
And I have to ask why is Kirihara so worried about Fuji in here. I can't help but think that Fuji will end dead. Kirihara's words sound kind of prophetic. Also, if it is the first VR encounter between Fuji and Yukimura means that in the present time of SoN have been others???
I don't except answers LOL I guess you'll tell more about them in the fic and I'll know all that. Only, I have to askYou have totally made my day *_*