ext_197042 ([identity profile] ran-mouri82.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] almondinflower 2006-09-02 04:24 am (UTC)

Wow. It's delightful to have an introspective Mori fic, especially since he speaks so rarely. And thank you for not falling into the common blunder of having Mori speak in 1st person; the effect always falls flat when used with quiet/restrained characters. The way this was written came off as observant and almost serene--much like Mori himself. Nice job!

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